Dialogue written internalized like this, together with your style, creates an image in my mind of some guy permanently trying to sink deeper into his own jacket as the world buzzes by. I'm fascinated how your writing pulled this image out of me.
"We are all lying about nothing all of the time." Between tangible burps and stealth mice turd attacks, there's plenty to want to lie about. Your art style reminds me a bit of Observer, video game (2017) but reads smoother, less jagged. I may have dated Josephine, probably mistaken.
Dialogue written internalized like this, together with your style, creates an image in my mind of some guy permanently trying to sink deeper into his own jacket as the world buzzes by. I'm fascinated how your writing pulled this image out of me.
🙏 It's a fascinating image.
"We are all lying about nothing all of the time." Between tangible burps and stealth mice turd attacks, there's plenty to want to lie about. Your art style reminds me a bit of Observer, video game (2017) but reads smoother, less jagged. I may have dated Josephine, probably mistaken.
Thank you 🙏
It's possible.
A good start to a series, great dialog.
Thank you 🙏
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Languid. nothing much happens but there's promise. the dialogue is good. the "sex" is well done. it's there but not in your face. I hate writing sex.
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Keep them coming.
🙏 All scheduled out.
Thank you very much 🙏