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Well crafted, haunting imagery.

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Thank you 🙏

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Whoa, what a crazy creature… this is hot stuff

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Thank you 🙏.

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Loved this! Sharp and descriptive. Perfect balance of backstory and present action. Gave me the shivers, and I absolutely want to know what happens next.

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Thank you very much 🙏. I am humbled.

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Excellent Read! Tks for writing it.

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Thank you very much for reading 🙏.

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Nice intense writing. Really enjoying your first two posts.

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Thank you very much 🙏.

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Oooh, creepfest! I like it!

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Thank you 🙏.

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Once again, your writing is like that creature on the tracks—in the best way—coming fast, monstrous yet composed, strangely compelling, gluing my eyes to the page. That rarely happens. Pray tell, how did you learn to write like this?

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Thank you! I'm blushing. I don't know how to answer your question but I write a lot, so maybe I get lucky sometimes.

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