All right, I stuck it out and now I’m back on board with this ride. This was the focused coming-down-to-earth chapter I needed. Style and voice were consistent and entertaining. All the events made immediate sense. The world and what’s possible in it expanded but not so much that I couldn’t keep up. Definite plot progression. I like Smokey Lou. Tight. Pressing on…
I like the ongoing acknowledgement of technologies as well as the potential exploits and flaws of them - also the city of Philly itself feels very much like a character: this sort of scummy, immoral, dangerous place. Love it.
All right, I stuck it out and now I’m back on board with this ride. This was the focused coming-down-to-earth chapter I needed. Style and voice were consistent and entertaining. All the events made immediate sense. The world and what’s possible in it expanded but not so much that I couldn’t keep up. Definite plot progression. I like Smokey Lou. Tight. Pressing on…
I like the ongoing acknowledgement of technologies as well as the potential exploits and flaws of them - also the city of Philly itself feels very much like a character: this sort of scummy, immoral, dangerous place. Love it.
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Loving the colourful characters Saru meets. The description of the hacking if that's what it was is really good. Need to read more.
Thank you very much 🙏.
Thank you 🙏.