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Hey, bro, I'm having trouble reading the post. It freezes in the middle and then goes blank. I'll try again later. It might be a connection prob.

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Thanks for letting me know. I’m sorry that’s happening. Each image is about 3mb. I’ll troubleshoot it.

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I’m loving this!!!! Reminds me of that John Cho movie where they did everything through texts and video calls.

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Thank you! I haven't heard of that but I'll check it out.

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yeah! I think it's called Searching! Really great concept and well done too IMO. Do you have a Kindle version of the book?

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Thanks! Right here:

https://books2read.com/ruok

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Sweet thank youuuu!!!

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nice concept! I will try and get through them all over the next few days!

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Thank you!

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I'm not always a fan of unconventional approaches, but this one really works for you. You got so much character and plot development into the form of texts. Nicely done!

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Thank you very much! 🙏

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I love this concept, and the story makes me want more!

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Thank you very much 🙏

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Intriguing beginning. And I'm also glad it's on Everand. I'll be sure to check it out when it's available

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Thank you 🙏 I try to get it on as many platforms as I can. As a hunter of weird and obscure media it always frustrates me when a platform issue prevents me from being able to experience something. (Repost because on Mobile I accidentally replied to the wrong comment).

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SO GOOD

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Very interesting concept. It will be interesting to see where it goes. Just one technical detail: Maybe this is intentional or it's just my outdated equipment (it happens on both my old Android tablet and my Tracfone), but I can only see the png file text in email. If I go over to Substack (the url, not the app), there's just a long, blank space. The blank space apparently is the png, though, because if I click on it, it pops up by itself, but is too super micro tiny to read. But in email, it's fine. Not really a problem, but I thought you might want to know. The story itself is very cool!

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Thanks for letting me know. It looks like the image format is causing issues for other people too so I may have to change it up.

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The pdf version is perfect!

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I'm so glad!

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Thank you 🙏 I try to get it on as many platforms as I can. As a hunter of weird and obscure media it always frustrates me when a platform issue prevents me from being able to experience something.

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