Aw, I used to be married to a guy like Harold. Big mean baby with zero EQ. Poor Daphne, just horrors all around. The format made the whole thing very urgent feeling. I really liked itš¤
Halfway through this story, I poured myself a giant bowl of Fruity Pebbles. True story. Love that you thought outside of the box here! The script format was a fun, fresh take. š
WHAT THE FUCK!?! This was so amazing, I was on the EDGE of my seat, JFC ANDY. I need a sip of whiskey after this. This was juicy *chefs kiss* storytelling. Yeah. yeah. So good. Still on the edge. Loved it. Every. Single. Second.
Such an awesome idea for a story - to describe comic panels. I had this insane and rad image pop into my head for the one scene (three colors, red white black)- of a silhouetted man standing behind a chain link fence, one hand up with fingers through the chain links and then his tongue too - the tongue and finger tips blood red with drips.
Anyway, excellent story, it conjured some wild pictures
Andy... is someone doing the graphics on this if you arent? i mean you story-boarded the whole thing, oven ready. in my mind it all looks like Farcry. great stuff. except now i really want a martini....
Thank you š. I originally wrote this as a screenplay and then switched it to a graphic novel script because of the formatting and with the hope that I could bring it to fruition. Right now I don't have any plans but that could change in 2025 depending on time and resources.
The graphic novel element made it that much easier to picture the story in my head. And that much easier to feel ready to launch a rebellion on behalf of Daphne and all the caged masses. Nice work!
Enjoyed it a lot. I'm guessing that the Futuro Zone isn't very far away from the Fallout Zone, that it can be easily accessed by robo-cab or nuke-powered car with outrageous tail fins
Thank you very much. š. I actually started this as a screenplay and then realized the format would be a nightmare for Substack, so I switched it to the graphic novel script.
Iām confused ā was that horror, comedy, or documentary?
I wish I knew myself. š Thank you for reading.
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Aw, I used to be married to a guy like Harold. Big mean baby with zero EQ. Poor Daphne, just horrors all around. The format made the whole thing very urgent feeling. I really liked itš¤
Thank you very much š.
Halfway through this story, I poured myself a giant bowl of Fruity Pebbles. True story. Love that you thought outside of the box here! The script format was a fun, fresh take. š
Many thanks š. Enjoy the corn confetti.
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Ok, someone animate this one pronto! What a great read!
Reminded me a lot of Shirley Jackson's The Lottery in the best way possible.
Thanks for sharing!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hPsdjlPVaJU
Goddammit Andy, that was really fucking good.
Thank you very much š. I'm rocking out now.
WHAT THE FUCK!?! This was so amazing, I was on the EDGE of my seat, JFC ANDY. I need a sip of whiskey after this. This was juicy *chefs kiss* storytelling. Yeah. yeah. So good. Still on the edge. Loved it. Every. Single. Second.
Thank you very much š. I am humbled.
Excellent visual storytelling. I saw every panel.
Thank you very much. š
Such an awesome idea for a story - to describe comic panels. I had this insane and rad image pop into my head for the one scene (three colors, red white black)- of a silhouetted man standing behind a chain link fence, one hand up with fingers through the chain links and then his tongue too - the tongue and finger tips blood red with drips.
Anyway, excellent story, it conjured some wild pictures
Thank you very much š. I am gratified it could conjure such cool imagery.
I tried creating the image and itā¦ did not work out lol beyond my narrow abilities
Iām really hoping an artist heeds your call! this was gripping, stylish, and gorgeously described
Thank you very much š.
Andy... is someone doing the graphics on this if you arent? i mean you story-boarded the whole thing, oven ready. in my mind it all looks like Farcry. great stuff. except now i really want a martini....
Thank you š. I originally wrote this as a screenplay and then switched it to a graphic novel script because of the formatting and with the hope that I could bring it to fruition. Right now I don't have any plans but that could change in 2025 depending on time and resources.
Me too. Dry and dirty.
The graphic novel element made it that much easier to picture the story in my head. And that much easier to feel ready to launch a rebellion on behalf of Daphne and all the caged masses. Nice work!
Distinctly written throughly enjoyed!
Thank you š.
Enjoyed it a lot. I'm guessing that the Futuro Zone isn't very far away from the Fallout Zone, that it can be easily accessed by robo-cab or nuke-powered car with outrageous tail fins
I definitely had some Fallout in my head, but when I collab with the artists I want to stress it's visually more V for Vendetta.
Good luck - if you ever find a good artist willing to collab let me know, I have a great project ripe for graphic treatment
I loved the additional screenplay elements you threw in. Very good.
Thank you very much. š. I actually started this as a screenplay and then realized the format would be a nightmare for Substack, so I switched it to the graphic novel script.
If this were reality, there would be so many executions as people didn't vote.
Not me, though, I always vote.....
Except when I don't.
Luckily it's just the Futuro Zone.
I felt like i was animating this as I went. Super good flow and wicked story. I'd love to experiment with this format too. Jazd.
Thank you very much š.