Just read this chapter. Cool vibe, fascinating world and natural-sounding information transfer as dialogue. Near-perfect pacing. Just when the reader’s eyes glaze over, the protagonist empathizes on queue and moves us to the next chunk. So skillful. Your hard work is noticed and appreciated! Plus: a creepy surprising twist at the end. Outstanding.
Just read this chapter. Cool vibe, fascinating world and natural-sounding information transfer as dialogue. Near-perfect pacing. Just when the reader’s eyes glaze over, the protagonist empathizes on queue and moves us to the next chunk. So skillful. Your hard work is noticed and appreciated! Plus: a creepy surprising twist at the end. Outstanding.
Thank you very much!